tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23878882.post114798069503003579..comments2012-05-09T20:09:35.129-04:00Comments on Quotes and Thoughts: A Long Short StoryAdielhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06577148168309526848noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23878882.post-1148147166477425772006-05-20T13:46:00.000-04:002006-05-20T13:46:00.000-04:00Dad,I'm glad you liked this story. I'll try to inc...Dad,<BR/>I'm glad you liked this story. I'll try to incorporate your thoughts into it because you have a very good point. My story is incomplete at this point. And seeing as I wrote this story for you I suppose I should listen to your input. ;o)Adielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06577148168309526848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23878882.post-1148129800045712682006-05-20T08:56:00.000-04:002006-05-20T08:56:00.000-04:00I love your 'long short story'. May I be so bold a...I love your 'long short story'. May I be so bold as to offer a short addition after, 'And now Karen got to go live there and Carl didn’t.' <BR/><BR/>[New paragraph]<BR/>But Carl knew something of his uncle's heart. He saw the many people who were struggling here, far from his uncle's house, the many who needed some encouragement, needed some help. And so, with his heart still set on getting to that house, he occupied himself with the work at hand. Some of it was enjoyable. Some of it was anything but. Yet all of it was necessary. And so, he worked diligently, still missing Karen. But by his life and his words he helped some to know about and look forward to not just being at the uncle's house, but being with his uncle. And that made being here worth it.<BR/><BR/>Adiel, my addition isn't as literary as your writing but I hope that you will incorporate my thoughts into your own.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com